tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161136668612564211.post3318619937861924659..comments2023-05-25T15:57:35.377+10:00Comments on CM Simpson: Writer & Gamer: Chuck Wendig's terribleminds Blog Flash Fiction Challenge: A Novice Revenges the RhythmC.M. Simpsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11739132385834639499noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161136668612564211.post-27033560354462835862012-09-28T19:04:29.008+10:002012-09-28T19:04:29.008+10:00Thank you, jo :-)Thank you, jo :-)C.M. Simpsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11739132385834639499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161136668612564211.post-61488981165362346282012-09-28T15:01:05.856+10:002012-09-28T15:01:05.856+10:00I enjoyed this story. You've done a great job ...I enjoyed this story. You've done a great job of using an unusual method os storytelling. You're right, that first sentence has a distinctive flow and rhythm, and its great to see that carry all the way through. Nicely done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com