An Excerpt from Today’s Edit—Shadow Trap
Work continues, and I move on to editing and updating the second book in the Shadow series, Shadow Trap . Not as much done as I was planning, but I tried to fit in some writing and walking, and then came across something that needed attention in the email, so it’s all full-ahead-stop, here. This scene caught me, as I edited, today – and I worked up a partial for the new cover to go with it: ---------------------------------------------------------------- The Gods Visit Tara waited, watching as the number of priests on the stage dwindled, until Gilzereet knelt alone. Just as the High Priest bowed his head to speak to Aravare, a door on the other side of the room slid abruptly open, and a man and a woman were ushered through to join those already waiting. The priestess, accompanying them, closed the door, before leading them to the cleared circle at the head of the room. As they drew closer, Tara noticed the woman was blue-skinned, and dressed in the robes of Yasmeh, the fi...