An Extract in Place of First Words: September 02, 2018—The Dockmaster
I finished going over the first 37,000 words of The Dockmaster , today—and then started the writing. Given today’s first words seem a bit boring, I decided to share one of pieces I edited that almost made me cry. In this extract, Tescha is shown her quarters in the sevarthin citadel: ---------------------------------------------------------------- The queen brushed an antenna across Tescha’s cheek, and turned away, her body guards forming a defensive perimeter around her, as she moved between rows of kashta grass that was close to flowering. Tescha did not need a mirror to know more pheromone dust glittered on her cheek, and she found she did not mind. She could not have hidden from the sevarthin, forever, and she did not like to live in fear. They could have kept her as their prisoner, while the queen pulled the information they needed from her head, and, while Tescha knew it was better for them to have it willingly, she could not find it in herself to resent it. ...