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Words from Today's Edit: The Unwanted

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Edits began today, on The Unwanted, the second book of the Strays of Lunar One series. In this, Oliver and Lewis are once again on the run. This scene occurs just prior to their departure from Alpha 9: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “Nettles?” Oliver asked, as a dapper gentleman in a white suit jacket stepped out of the small craft’s hatch. He was jerked back inside, as four of the guards closed ranks and jogged to block Oliver and Lewis’s path, raising their blasters as they came. Oliver skidded to a halt, and glanced over at his friend. “Was this part of the plan?” Lewis shook his head. “Roof top was supposed to be empty.” Oliver looked at the guards, who’d stopped and now formed a line in front of them. “Uh huh.” He glanced over at the door and then back at Lewis. “So, is it?” “Is it what?” Lewis had started to raise his hands, and Oliver was tempted to follow his exampl...