Free Read: Forest Connections
Today, I managed to settle down and write a response to the latest flash fiction challenge on Chuck Wendig's Terribleminds blog - The Dead Body. There were only two rules: the word limit was 1,000, and the story had to open with a dead body. This is what came out:
Forest Connections
The body swayed
in the trees rocked by storm winds and illuminated by lightning. It was naked,
except for the green, leather gloves it wore on both hands—the hands from which
it was suspended from the tree.
It
might have been an attractive body, if there hadn’t been a gaping wound where
its stomach should be. Perhaps… but Garamond wasn’t looking at the body, didn’t
notice the slender hips or sculpted chest, the beauty of fine-chiselled cheek
bones or luxurious fall of hair. Garamond fought his breakfast back into place,
swallowed bile, forced his focus to the other trees in the grove, the ground
onto which he’d nearly stepped.
If
it hadn’t been for the crow flying out of the chest cavity, he’d have crossed into
the spell, been trapped within it. The crow could fly, and had not been caught
in the markings carved through grass and rock and the earth—or perhaps the spell
had not been intended for crows.
Garamond
noticed the small bodies curled on the ground, wings crumpled as though they’d
cushioned the falls. He studied them, praying their tiny lives hadn’t been used
to fuel the magic, releasing a soft sigh of relief when he noticed they breathed.
What had drawn them into the circle?
Lightning
flashed again, and cloud subsumed the dawnlight, as Garamond circumnavigated the
clearing, the spell’s workings becoming easier to identify, now he knew to look
for them. Each one served a purpose. Each one was part of a pair. Some were
meant to contain, and some were meant to focus. He didn’t notice the steps
echoing his own, great bodies passing as glimmering white shadows, through the
not-so-distant trees. Garamond returned to where he’d almost blundered into the
trap.
Why here? He crouched. Why here where it can catch anyone who comes
along?
And why now? Why this day, and not the day
before, or the day after?
Everything
was significant. The timing, the bait—ah, the bait. He had been forgetting it
was a trap. And traps were set for catch things. One set snares for small game
such as rabbits or pheasant, dug pits for bear, used the right gender and race
to lure intelligent humanoids to locations where they were vulnerable. Why
this?
What
was to happen today?
Noting
the symbols carved into both earth and tree, Garamond settled, cross-legged in
the middle of the path. He eliminated solstice celebrations, moon-linked festivals,
seasonal first days. None of those were due,-and there had been no unusual
phenomena to spark such sacrifice.
Shifting
his thoughts from the forest to the village, he sifted through rumours: a
visiting nobleman, the king’s messenger passing through, stories of her
ladyship visiting the clans…
Her
ladyship—and her proclivities were well known. Garamond studied the body. The
man had been the right build to draw her attention, had the long hair attract
her like a butterfly to nectar. Was he looking at petty revenge on his lord’s
behalf?
No;
Garamond pushed that thought away. His lord had no need of magic, was wary of
its practitioners. Would he hire? Again, Garamond pushed the thought away, and
made himself look at the body.
He
wanted to lift the hair, see if those ears were elven, wanted to take a closer
look at the face. Was it marked by tribal tattoos, did the throat show signs of
having worn torc or collar? Apprehension knotted coldly in his gut. Had the
clans objected to her ladyship’s choice of lovers?
Garamond
discarded that idea, too. Her ladyship’s lovers had never bothered the clans,
before. No, this was something new. One of her secrets, perhaps, or something
to bring her, if such a device was needed.
Garamond
knew too little of the lady’s past, too little of her travelling, but he did know she sometimes took a side road,
and her journey almost always took her longer than expected. He had dismissed
the forest too soon.
What
was there in the forest to draw her ladyship’s attention?
He
stood and studied the trap. The body wasn’t immediately visible from the path.
It would have been seen easily four paces in, where a natural gap led to the
giant beech dominating it. It would be the perfect place for a rendezvous, but
that didn’t explain the fairies.
Sensitive
to magic, the little creatures had flown into the trap, anyway, and, judging from
the way their bodies had fallen, they hadn’t followed the crow’s path. They’d
obviously flown in in a panic. Garamond couldn’t make sense of it, but he
stared harder, studying every detail, again, hoping for something that would
make sense, wishing something to stand out.
Why
the green gloves?
Why
strip the rest of the sacrifice bare and leave the gloves?
Why
green? Why a beech?
Green-fingered, Garamond thought, in the forest. A druid, and that explains
the fairies. Possibly elven, the beech for wisdom, providence, a sacred site.
So, who?
Feet
stamped impatiently behind him. Hitherto silent, the shadows had gathered,
demanding his attention. Startled, Garamond turned, drawing his sword before he
was facing them. Unicorns, ever the fairy companions, nodded their approval,
and snorted, still bobbing their heads. Garamond lowered the blade, and the
nearest nose-nudged him over the circle and into the spell.
He
shouted in alarm—and discovered the spell did not touch him. Yes, it had been a spell of entrapment, but
not for him. The unicorns did not enter, snorting anxiously at its edge.
magical creatures then. In spite of the approaching storm, the clearing smelt ‘wrong’.
Defilement.
A
beech tree. Now, Garamond understood, whipped around, tried to seek a battle
ground where he was not likely to crush fairies underfoot. He met the serpentine
sorceress as she dropped from the tree, taking her down as the spell broke with
the storm. Rain cleansed the spell marks as Garamond carefully gathered and settled
the fairies in the beech tree’s branches.
The
druid, he buried, while the unicorns stood guard.
Now I want to read more of Garamond! I really enjoyed this :) I've been visiting all the links in Chuck Wendig's Flash Fiction challenge, and oh boy am I finding some awesome writing!
ReplyDeleteThanks, W.R. I'll have to give Garamond a longer piece, I think. There are some wonderful writers that do the flash fiction challenges. Really worth reading. I'm glad you're enjoying the stories you're finding there :-)
DeletePopped by from Chuck Wendig's blog :) I really enjoyed this one. I'd love to read more about Garamond- it's just the sort of police/fantasy vibe I like.
ReplyDeleteThis is my first police fantasy. I'm really glad you liked it. Thank you :-)
DeleteThank you!
DeleteMeandered here from Wendig's challenge - I love elves and dark fantasy -- I love traps, and I'm totally a sucker for unicorns.
ReplyDeleteThis was fun to read; thank you for sharing!
You're welcome :-) And thank you for coming by and visiting.
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