WiP: Another 366 Days of Poetry - Scaled Seduction

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Continuing with our experimentation with a third variant of didactic cinquain, this piece was all about the mermaid, another creature of myth.


Scaled Seduction


Mermaids

Scaled, sweet-voiced,

Bathe in sun and shoreline surf

Drawing eyes of longing fear

Sirens

 

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