Poetry Challenge—Introducing the Englyn: Form 8—the Englyn Lleddbroest
An englyn is a form of Welsh or Cornish
verse, with a reputation of being hard to master. It has several different
variants, all of which are governed by strict rules. This week, we’ll look at
the englyn lledfbroest.
The englyn lledfbroest consists of a
four-line verse. Each line has seven syllables that half rhyme with each other.
A half-rhyme is one where the final consonants agree. In the englyn lleddfbroest
the half rhymes must use the following dipthongs: ae, oe, wy and ei.
I have used ‘ay’ instead of ‘ae’ to
reflect changes in the English language, included ‘ow’ to be synonymous with ‘oe’,
and used ‘ai’ as the same rhyme as ‘ei’. I’m not sure if these variations are
acceptable to purists, but they work rhyme-wise.
I Live Again
My
heart had gone far away
My
terror I held at bay
Never
hoped to see the day
Thought
I’d died and dead I’d stay
Then
morning broke night’s dark reign
I
felt blood move in my veins
I
raised my head, breathed again
Took
up the thread, my life skein.
Why don’t you give it a try? Try writing at least one englyn
lleddbroest for each day of the week.
You can find out more about how to
write englyns from the following sites:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Englyn
http://www.oocities.org/sca_bard/childrensenglynmilwr.html
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